I have placed three updated files in the relevant NextCloud folder:
These three files are now in the 7.3 template, include captions for figures and tables, and have a little less negativity in the text (e.g., less use of the word "unfortunately"; etc).
With regards to Appendix B, I had to implement the modifications with track changes off - I tried to use track changes but it proved impossible due to the re-structuring of tables that was needed. The files for Chapter 10 and Appendix A were updated with track changes on.
None of these three are scheduled for significant updates at this issue. Please could somebody review the figure / table captions, and any other tracked changes to make sure I haven’t done anything stupid?